If you're having problems with characterisation, viewpoint, dialogue, etc, or if you've received too many rejections from publishers without any indication of where you might be going wrong, I can help you.

For £30, I'll correspond with you, personally, to help with those aspects of your writing that trouble you most; also, I'll give you an objective appraisal of your writing.

Please send a short resumé of your book - the genre, period and description of
the view-point character should be enough. I will understand if you don't wish to
give away any information about your plot, or anything else that might compromise your copyright, in fact I recommend that you don't share creative ideas with anybody, other than prospective publishers. Also, please attach your first chapter, plus one other, together with a brief account of your writing experience, and, if you can, indicate any particular areas you would like me to address.

In return, I'll send to you relevant explanatory scripts, together with an objective appraisal of your writing. Please remember, though, I shall be judging your work against mainstream publishing standards.